Posted on December 26, 2007

Yes, the first major edit of the completed manuscript of the second in the Rabbi David Cohen series is DONE!

Today’s assignment is to break it into chapters. I don’t write chapters as I’m actively working on the ms so much as I write sections. Later some will become chapters and others will remain sections within a chapter.

I need to look at how the story flows and where a good breaking point for a chapter would be (with an eye always toward cliffhangers and other nefarious means of keeping readers from putting down the book), and then also look at how many pages are in each chapter, to achieve some balance throughout the book.

Next up, making printed copies for my beta readers, who will have something to curl up with and mark up with red pen in January. Then it’s on to my primary editor and advance copies to go out to pre-publication reviewers.

In addition to asking for your help with the pitch, you all are also de facto part of my focus group (isn’t that cool?) so I’ll be asking your opinions on a bunch of stuff, including your votes for the published title (rather than the working title I’ve had), votes for your favorite cover, and so forth.

You can help determine the future of Jewish literature!


  1. Sheyna

    Shira and Benning – thanks and LOL! It might not work, but gimme gimme gimme is nice to hear. 🙂

  2. Sheyna

    Shira and Benning – thanks and LOL! It might not work, but gimme gimme gimme is nice to hear. 🙂

  3. benning

    I agree. I want book #2!

    Gimme, gimme, gimme! (as if that has EVER worked!)

  4. Shira Salamone

    Mazal tov! I’m looking forward to read this next installment in your series.

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